Feedback For Final Edit Before Final Cut Of Tiny Terror

Our Feedback For This Cut was:

• The 80's retro style title screen makes sense as it is a childs play influenced film.
• The jumps are a little sharp
• Jodi should scream
• Shot of the two starting to go up the stairs might be useful
• Black Screen at the end lasts too long
• Slow down the fade down in most of the fades
• Fade up more slowly, too
• More of a shot anchoring when Jodi is going to the bathroom
• Fade the music UP when look hears the bang
• Lukes failed reaction needs to speed up
• Layer when Luke is moving to the bathroom
• More multiple layering needs to be added.

I put the rough cut onto FACEBOOK to gain audience feedback. I asked my 'friends' on facebook to 'Like' the opening if they enjoyed it and would go and see the full 90 minute feature film. 18 people 'Liked' ths which would be seen as quite popular. Also, a few others added comments to add to the feedback to help us improve, or tell us what they especially liked.