Feedback for Rough Cut Tiny Terror Location 1

FEEDBACK:
Good variety of shots.
 The editing is too 'jumpy' which needs to be changed.
 For full use of the false scare, there should be no footage of anybody knocking at the door, instead, the girl could be in her room reading a magazine for example.
The character Damien should not say "Where's she gone?" because, although it provides exposition, it is too fake, instead, he could say "Jodi, Jodi?"
Try different doll sounds for variety.
Get rid of when Jodi says "interesting..."
The POV shot of the boy hiding behind the branch is well done.