Rough Cut 2 Feedback

FEEDBACK:

• Use possible trick of Texas Chainsaw Massacre with light flashing in and out with the use of transitions.
• Good to see that Barncasarn are concidering soundtracking at this stage.
• Use '&' instead of 'And' in titles.
• Establish that the house will be in an isolated setting.
• More POV shots needed.
• More variation of shots are needed.
• Get rid of the sequence where the couple go upstairs.
• The bra needs to go over the doll.
• Instead of luke getting out of the bed with his trousers on, he could get out of the bed with the duvet wrapped around him or have bare legs.
• Shakiness in the shots needs to be avoided.
• When Luke (the boyfriend character) hears the bang from the kitchen, a close up shot will show his emotion better than the medium long shot did.
• A lot of different angles and shot takes need to be taken in the bathroom to emphasise the excitement of what is happening.